Day 139:
Nov 16-Ode, typically an Ode has 3 stanzas, 10 lines each. Mainly iambic pentameter. ababcdecde. 8th line typically iambic trimester(6 syllables). 1st phrase strophe, intro subject. 2nd anti-strophe, development/conflict. Last epode/conclusion. subject to honor or remember, like elegy/epitaph. Non-traditional any style/form. Different 3rd stanza=Pindaric Ode. 8 syllable epode. Some poems have been called odes, but do not fit the traditional form, known as the Horation form. Title: A Love Lost
O love, what did I do to lose you so?
To lose you now, o pitied loss to see.
Alone yea, once upon a time ago
Alone til meeting you, I felt such glee
A lovely lass with fine finesse I’d say
With hair so soft and with a certain style.
Your eyes of gorgeous blue, right then I knew
My heart you had that day
For you I’d walk for more than just a mile
For lightened as a feather I just flew.
But something happened causing you to go
My love was not enough, so you did flee
Such conflict, I had not foreseen to know
The tears, the ache, you wanted to be free
So different, in how we work and play
I tried to understand so not to rile
But you seemed not to give me any clue
The skies then turned to gray
Despite my efforts turning into bile
I wished for love to grow within us two.
My dear, I wish you well, your love to grow
If not for me, for one to love you, he.
One day the heart will mend, forgotten woe.
Deserving love, so understandably
I pray for happiness to come your way.
Forgotten are the aches in our love’s trial
Fond memories remain; no longer blue.
Your happiness, for this I pray.
In life apart we may be for awhile
In heaven joined with God, we’ll be made new.
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