Tuesday, July 10, 2012

I was stuck in the boondocks with a broken down vehicle for a week, but now I'm back to civilization, where the internet is freely available. I wrote a number of poems to match each day in July, for the purpose of writing a poem a day for a year. Posting will be a bit haphazard.
Day 1-written July 1:
be my attempt to write an Octina. This form is of the Sestina family. It has 8 words used in each phrase, one per line. The Pattern follows: ABCDEFGH  HADBCGEF 
FHCAEDBG  GFEHBCAD   DGBFAEHC   CDAGHBFE  ECHDFAGB   BEFCGHDA  A/B G/E D/F C/H(last 4 have all 8 words) . A strict Sestina is Iambic Pentameter. A future Octina will do so.

Octina: How To
So what do you think of numbers?
What about poetic phrases?
A poem does not have to rhyme.
Alliteration can make it.
Letters set along little lines.
Sounds are set out as parts of speech.
One line sentences or broken
Into a fine lined Octina.

How do you make an Octina?
It is all done with the numbers
One through eight, each line you make it
A word. They then make eight phrases.
Remember, it does not have to rhyme
Unless you want it to. A broken
Enjambment keeps thoughts within lines,
Read aloud to sound like a speech.

Are you getting tired of my speech?
There is more to this Octina.
 You can try an internal rhyme
Just don’t slumber with the numbers.
Don’t forget to connect all the lines.
Yes, it is long, but don’t give it
Up yet. Keep working the phrases.
It can still be fixed if broken.

Yes, it might look to be broken.
It may not sound like a fine speech,
But what’s important are the lines.
Each part make up the Octina.
Moving words around the phrases
Can make it hard to make it rhyme.
Don’t fret it, just use the numbers
To make it work, then you’ve done it.

If you need some help to write it,
Try music to fix a  broken
Writer’s block. Then work the phrases
Out into a fine sounding speech
Of a poem. Make the numbers
Work for you. You will find the lines
Write themselves in an Octina.
You might eventually rhyme.

Take time too, for an internal rhyme
A real strict meter can make it
Hard, but remember the numbers
Are the point. a sentence broken
Is okay. Make the Octina
Alive with sounds in the phrases
Using all the figures of speech
Within the framework of the lines.

The Octina has two more lines
Than the Sestina. Neither rhyme
Typically. The Octina
Is a poem, a form and it
Is also challenging for speech
Making. Now just take the numbers,
Move them around. Even broken
Sentences can make good phrases.

We’re almost done with the phrases.
Combine words in the last four lines
Then you’re through with your little speech.
Remember, there’s no need to rhyme.
Doesn’t rhyme? No, it’s not broken.
The phrases make the Octina.
You just might make a speech from it.
Make sure the lines match the numbers.

Match the numbers to the phrases
Then combine all the broken lines.
It does not have to be a speech.
Don’t rhyme, just make an Octina.

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